Re: [ietf-provreg] draft-gould-rfc4310bis-04.txt Submitted forReview

[Bernie Hoeneisen <bernie@ietf.hoeneisen.ch>]

Hi James

Thanks for the update and your work behind this.


Here a first feedback after skimming through it:

* section 5 (page 24):
   s/Extensible Provisioning Protocol v1.0/Extensible Provisioning Protocol v1.1/

* I suggest to include implementation recommendations, in particular for
   servers, on how to deal with the transition from 1.0 to 1.1.
   I'll think about some decent text and might come back to the list.
   If anyone else has great ideas for suitable wording, feel free to
   suggest it independently to the list.

* You might want to add an RFC Editors' note to sections "Appendix A./B."
   e.g. [RFC Editor: This section is to be removed before publication]

* You might want to include a summary of the most important changes
   beween 4310 and the new RFC (no details), (and publish it in the new
   RFC) to help people better understand the differences between 4310
   and the new RFC.

That's all for now. More might come once I find the time to read it more 
thoroughly.

cheers,
  Bernie



On Wed, 10 Feb 2010, James Gould wrote:

> All,
> 
> I submitted 04 of the draft.  The official draft is available at the URL below:
> 
> http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-gould-rfc4310bis-04.txt
> 
> There are many updates from 03 described in Appendix A based on the feedback on the list and privately.  These changes
> are substantial, so please review it and provide me with your feedback as soon as possible.  
> 
> I did not include anything in 04 related to Eduardo’s active flag request based on the variety of feedback on the
> provreg list that shows that it’s not ready for inclusion in rfc4310bis.  I encourage that the discussions continue on
> the list for possible inclusion in a future draft.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
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> 
> JG
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